human first: Please forgive me

Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Please forgive me

Please forgive me
I have no idea about the literature,
The language and its grammar
A novel is a Nile river,
A metaphor is a Mount Everest
A non-fiction is an African Forest
A poem is an Ocean
Yet I dare to touch them
Before my intense feelings
And thoughts explode
You may call it a prose or a phrase
Please forgive me
Please forgive me

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Poem: Paradise of Fatasies
Member: Chitra
Comment: exotic, heart warming and soul stirring Sir, thank you for sharing
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Poem: Haiku:4-a
Member: Barry A Lanier
Comment: Really so much penned in brevity as to the long, , , yes journey of despair, , , , very effective haiku, , , ,
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21 Apr (22 hours ago)
resma:
ur poetry is amazn

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Date & Time: 3/30/2009 11:30:00 PM
Poem: Abandon me not!
Member: Anjali Sinha
Comment: shekar this is a real lovely poem yeah so many do just that specially when in love they wear so many masks only to attract the other side-- but then if one sees carefully thats life --thats what nature has destined for procreation. Isnt it? -10 anjali
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Poem: Haiku:31
Member: Danny Fairfield
Comment: now that i can relate to 10+
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Date & Time: 3/28/2009 2:29:00 AM
Poem: Haiku : 12
Member: Indira Renganathan
Comment: Three lined truth...ofcourse a pleasant poem
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Date & Time: 3/28/2009 2:13:00 AM
Poem: Haiku: 13
Member: Jake Erkens
Comment: Excellent haiku. Well penned! keep writing... sincerely, on behalf of Jake, Davke
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Date & Time: 3/24/2009 3:21:00 AM
Poem: Zero
Member: Naseer Ahmed Nasir
Comment: Zero is the hero. A very moving poem.
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Date & Time: 3/23/2009 8:23:00 AM
Poem: Religion is the Reason
Member: Reshma Ramesh
Comment: i am a human.....................excellent write....well penned
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Date & Time: 3/23/2009 3:50:00 AM
Poem: Beauty is Naughty
Member: Indira Babbellapati
Comment: yes, beauty does tease us into tears if u call that naughty!
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Date & Time: 3/23/2009 2:18:00 AM
Poem: Oh!
Member: Anurag Duggal
Comment: I love the poem....emotions honestly expressed with beautiful words lovely write 10+++
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Poem: Beauty is Naughty
Member: Dr.Hitesh Sheth
Comment: beauty is in eye of beholder...........God is all beautiful so his all creating is beautiful.........Good Write.10+++
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Poem: Got to learn
Member: Catrina Heart
Comment: Got to learn to share something even in small ways, for in small little thing goes big in the heart of the needy....10
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Poem: If I Can
Member: Yoonoos Peerbocus
Comment: a meaningful monologue nicely penned significant to ponder on
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Poem: If I can
Member: Seema Aarella
Comment: Life is an endless quest of finding these answers, until then be fascinated by the thrills of this journey! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice write!
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Poem: Religion is the Reason
Member: Premji
Comment: loud outcry........................................
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Poem: Beauty is very Naughty
Member: Anjali Sinha
Comment: yes I second Hitesh beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder a nice write -10 anjali
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Poem: Desert of Despair
Member: Kesav Easwaran
Comment: nice poem...compelling opening lines...neat commanding diction...good work...i liked...10
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Poem: An incessant cry
Member: Dr.Hitesh Sheth
Comment: Tired of weeping; surrenders to sleep And incidence always leaves scars deep.....................Poem reflects reality of our time.........Good Write.........
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Poem: Wild Beast
Member: Yoonoos Peerbocus
Comment: interesting piece...in few much said
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Poem: Paradise of Fantasies
Member: Indira Babbellapati
Comment: rendezvous with your lady muse...interesting!
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Poem: Paradise of Fantasies
Member: Catrina Heart
Comment: The ardent verse, the inspiration of lives and fantancy of creative minds must always give paradise? ? ? Great imagery here........Thanks!
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Poem: Paradise of Fantasies
Member: Lago Lago
Comment: A fantastic write each line carries value.........and it is exotic.....surprises always there not only in love but in life too......
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Poem: Paradise of Fantasies
Member: Barry A Lanier
Comment: layer upon layer of fantazical stimulation from apparently the subjects fantasy love or otherwise real one, , , , , ,
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Poem: A Poet
Member: Reshma Ramesh
Comment: haha! ! great description of as poet...................wellpenned
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Poem: Paradise of Fantasies
Member: Caroll
Comment: such a love! very well written
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